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Stone Circle
Is the ability to read minds a blessing or a curse?
When Antonius’s father dies, he must work to support his family. He finds employment as a servant in the Palazzo Ducal, home of Conte Valperga. Sixteenth-century Pesaro is a society governed by status, and Antonius has limited opportunities.
When a competition is announced, Antonius seizes his chance. The winner will be apprenticed to the town seer. Antonius shares first place with his employer’s son.
The two men compete for their mentor’s approval. As their knowledge of magic and alchemy grows, so does the rivalry and animosity between them. When the love of a beautiful woman is at stake, Antonius must find a way to follow his heart and navigate his future.
When Antonius’s father dies, he must work to support his family. He finds employment as a servant in the Palazzo Ducal, home of Conte Valperga. Sixteenth-century Pesaro is a society governed by status, and Antonius has limited opportunities.
When a competition is announced, Antonius seizes his chance. The winner will be apprenticed to the town seer. Antonius shares first place with his employer’s son.
The two men compete for their mentor’s approval. As their knowledge of magic and alchemy grows, so does the rivalry and animosity between them. When the love of a beautiful woman is at stake, Antonius must find a way to follow his heart and navigate his future.
286 pages, Paperback
First published December 1, 2017
About the author
Kate Murdoch
3 books59 followersArtist turned writer Kate Murdoch is the author of Stone Circle (2017) and The Orange Grove (2019).
Her short-form fiction has been published in literary journals and anthologies in Australia, UK, US and Canada.
Stone Circle was a First in Category winner in the Chaucer Awards 2018 for pre-1750’s historical fiction. The Orange Grove was a finalist in the Chaucer Awards 2019 for pre-1750’s historical fiction.
Kate was awarded a KSP Fellowship at the KSP Writers’ Centre in 2019. In 2024, she will travel to France for a writing residency at the Chateau d'Orquevaux.
Her short-form fiction has been published in literary journals and anthologies in Australia, UK, US and Canada.
Stone Circle was a First in Category winner in the Chaucer Awards 2018 for pre-1750’s historical fiction. The Orange Grove was a finalist in the Chaucer Awards 2019 for pre-1750’s historical fiction.
Kate was awarded a KSP Fellowship at the KSP Writers’ Centre in 2019. In 2024, she will travel to France for a writing residency at the Chateau d'Orquevaux.
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January 11, 2018
In a 16th century Italian village, status and property are valued above all else. The station you’re born into is the same one you’ll pass onto your children, whether you’re deserving or not. Antonius is poor but has a special gift for reading thoughts. He’s always tried to keep it to himself but when the village’s seer holds a competition for an apprentice, Antonius jumps at the chance and secures the head apprentice position while the Comte’s son, Nichola, is the understudy apprentice. Even though Antonius’ gift is stronger, the seer appoints Nichola as an apprentice to appease his patron, Comte Valperga.
As both young men learn under the tutelage of Savinus, the seer, they vie for the affection of Giulia, his beautiful daughter. The rivalry heats up between the two apprentices. Nichola cheats, robs and sneaks his way into Giulia’s heart while Antonius loves her from afar. Savinus advises Antonius to wait to confess his true feelings until Nichola’s true nature is revealed. But jealousy and deceit rule a heart and he’ll do whatever it takes to make Giulia his. Will Giulia choose the right man, or will it end in a disastrous climax?
A poignant, beguiling story dealing with matters of the heart: family, falling in love and following your heart. This is the kind of historical fiction I love most, where the author transports me to a time and place I’ve never been. Kate Murdoch’s lyrical narration reminds me of Gabriel García Márquez. She describes the nuances of Medieval Italy without being heavy-handed. There’s almost a poetic nature to the story and its characters. I loved it!
Favorite Character/Quote: Antonius. I love how he didn’t let his station in his life and/or other people’s views dictate his life. He’s a gifted young man and through hard work and perseverance, he can have everything he’s ever wanted. He leaps off the page and he’s my favorite character.
My Rating: 5 stars
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As both young men learn under the tutelage of Savinus, the seer, they vie for the affection of Giulia, his beautiful daughter. The rivalry heats up between the two apprentices. Nichola cheats, robs and sneaks his way into Giulia’s heart while Antonius loves her from afar. Savinus advises Antonius to wait to confess his true feelings until Nichola’s true nature is revealed. But jealousy and deceit rule a heart and he’ll do whatever it takes to make Giulia his. Will Giulia choose the right man, or will it end in a disastrous climax?
A poignant, beguiling story dealing with matters of the heart: family, falling in love and following your heart. This is the kind of historical fiction I love most, where the author transports me to a time and place I’ve never been. Kate Murdoch’s lyrical narration reminds me of Gabriel García Márquez. She describes the nuances of Medieval Italy without being heavy-handed. There’s almost a poetic nature to the story and its characters. I loved it!
Favorite Character/Quote: Antonius. I love how he didn’t let his station in his life and/or other people’s views dictate his life. He’s a gifted young man and through hard work and perseverance, he can have everything he’s ever wanted. He leaps off the page and he’s my favorite character.
My Rating: 5 stars
This review first appeared: https://princessofthelight.wordpress.com
July 11, 2021
Although I found the story a little slow at first, when I finally found my book legs, it turned out to be a very good read.
As a history loving person, I loved the descriptions of the landscape. As a professional costume designer, I loved the descriptions of the clothing.
A very interesting plot, gripping characters, all interwoven at a place in time where people were profoundly religious, believing in omens and portents at the same time.
It is well crafted storyline filled with vivid characterisation, and beautiful scenery that is rich in detail.
It’s about 2 young men, who are selected to be the apprentices to the Seer Savinus. Antonius, the good guy, from the lower class, has surprise powers. Nichola, is a politically selected noble, who has limited skill, opposite of Antonius. Thus, a rivalry begins.
I recommend this book.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
As a history loving person, I loved the descriptions of the landscape. As a professional costume designer, I loved the descriptions of the clothing.
A very interesting plot, gripping characters, all interwoven at a place in time where people were profoundly religious, believing in omens and portents at the same time.
It is well crafted storyline filled with vivid characterisation, and beautiful scenery that is rich in detail.
It’s about 2 young men, who are selected to be the apprentices to the Seer Savinus. Antonius, the good guy, from the lower class, has surprise powers. Nichola, is a politically selected noble, who has limited skill, opposite of Antonius. Thus, a rivalry begins.
I recommend this book.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
August 3, 2019
Stone Circle is a classic, romantic tale suited to young adult and adult audiences. Set in Renaissance Italy, the story is brimming with the esoteric practice of the era – geomancy, astrology and 'seeing' are especially prominent. The inclusion of such practices might for some place the novel in the fantasy genre, but I would dispute that. Esoteric practice is not fantasy! This novel might just as well be termed visionary fiction or magic realism.
The story is simple. When seer Savinus needs a new apprentice, he devises a simple test to find one. Two applicants show the necessary attributes and Savinus decides to take them both on, making the poor and lowly and very talented Antonius his primary apprentice, and the rich and spoilt and lesser talented Nichola his secondary. Any reader will predict the tensions to follow. Nicholas shows himself to be jealous and spiteful, and Antonius of fine character. Yet he is a man with burdens and troubles and might not make the best decisions. Both young men are also attracted to Savinus' beautiful and intelligent daughter, Giulia – also a seer – and competing for her affections. Giulia cannot practice her talents as she is female and would be classed a witch and persecuted if she did. Yet she is always there, always at the edge of being exposed.
The plot is as old as storytelling but Murdoch fills it with a unique complexity the result of her intriguing cast of lovingly crafted characters and the esoteric theme. Add to this an evocatively portrayed historical setting and the result is a captivating and gentle read that progresses at a measured pace with numerous delights and insights along the way. Stone Circle is a novel filled with charm, a story that envelopes the reader and takes them far from everyday reality. Highly recommended.
The story is simple. When seer Savinus needs a new apprentice, he devises a simple test to find one. Two applicants show the necessary attributes and Savinus decides to take them both on, making the poor and lowly and very talented Antonius his primary apprentice, and the rich and spoilt and lesser talented Nichola his secondary. Any reader will predict the tensions to follow. Nicholas shows himself to be jealous and spiteful, and Antonius of fine character. Yet he is a man with burdens and troubles and might not make the best decisions. Both young men are also attracted to Savinus' beautiful and intelligent daughter, Giulia – also a seer – and competing for her affections. Giulia cannot practice her talents as she is female and would be classed a witch and persecuted if she did. Yet she is always there, always at the edge of being exposed.
The plot is as old as storytelling but Murdoch fills it with a unique complexity the result of her intriguing cast of lovingly crafted characters and the esoteric theme. Add to this an evocatively portrayed historical setting and the result is a captivating and gentle read that progresses at a measured pace with numerous delights and insights along the way. Stone Circle is a novel filled with charm, a story that envelopes the reader and takes them far from everyday reality. Highly recommended.
September 2, 2017
Stone Circle is a fascinating book I had the privilege to read before its due publication date later this year. Kate Murdoch transports the reader to medieval Italy where she tells us a tale of magical realism. Savinus, a seer, needs an apprentice to teach his knowledge. Antonius, a young lad from a poor family, is his candidate though Savinus
must also employ Nichola, the son of Conte Valperga, his patron. As the young boys begin their education under Savinus' guidance, both fall in love with Giulia, his beautiful daughter. The rivalry between the young men does not escape the attention of Savinus nor the Conte's. Guilia falls for the fairy tale prospects of a marriage with Conte's heir, but is this what her heart really wants? Meanwhile, the church is reconsidering the benefits of Savinus' practice, as well as other seers. A love triangle set in Pesaro, Italy with vivid descriptions of the area, from the lavishness of the Count's palace, to the poverty in the village; the ball at the palace, to the mysterious atmosphere of the Stone Circle up on the hills. Kate Murdoch delivers a visual feast of reality mixed with magic, alchemy, and geomancy, as well as a gripping tale with lively characters. Thoroughly recommended.
must also employ Nichola, the son of Conte Valperga, his patron. As the young boys begin their education under Savinus' guidance, both fall in love with Giulia, his beautiful daughter. The rivalry between the young men does not escape the attention of Savinus nor the Conte's. Guilia falls for the fairy tale prospects of a marriage with Conte's heir, but is this what her heart really wants? Meanwhile, the church is reconsidering the benefits of Savinus' practice, as well as other seers. A love triangle set in Pesaro, Italy with vivid descriptions of the area, from the lavishness of the Count's palace, to the poverty in the village; the ball at the palace, to the mysterious atmosphere of the Stone Circle up on the hills. Kate Murdoch delivers a visual feast of reality mixed with magic, alchemy, and geomancy, as well as a gripping tale with lively characters. Thoroughly recommended.
November 29, 2017
Stone Circle, an historical fantasy novel set in Renaissance Italy, is the debut offering by Australian painter turned writer, Kate Murdoch. Mystical elements converge with historical superstitions and romantic notions in this atmospheric coming of age story about two young men vying for the attentions of one woman while also competing for the top position as apprentice to a highly revered seer.
While historical fiction is my favourite genre of all, I generally avoid fantasy like the historical plagues I read so much about. That’s not to say I haven’t enjoyed fantasy novels in the past, it’s just that I find them more often than not overly complicated to follow. Combining history and fantasy is to my mind, a big call, yet Kate has pulled it off very well. The story is authentic to its historical setting as well as being deeply atmospheric in terms of mystical content. I particularly enjoyed the sections that detailed the study of alchemy and prophecy.
I did find the story to be rather fast paced, and while this in no way impeded my ability to follow the events, I do think it impacted on both character and plot depth. It seemed at times as though Kate was holding back and I longed for her to have just dug in a little deeper. But I’m used to historicals that are longer and more explorative so my expectations may simply be in line with that. I also found at times there was a bit of head hopping within scenes. These are minor issues though when you consider the fantastical scope and historical detail of this novel, particularly within the framework of it being a debut offering.
I’m quite looking forward to seeing what Kate will produce for us next as I think she shows a lot of promise within the historical fantasy genre. She has a deft hand when it comes to setting scenes, particularly those that involve nature and mystical conjurings. Overall, Stone Circle was a very enjoyable read and I wish Kate all the best for success with its release and eagerly await her next novel.
Thanks is extended to the author and Fireship Press for providing me with a copy of Stone Circle for review.
Stone Circle is book 72 in my 2017 Australian Women Writers Challenge
While historical fiction is my favourite genre of all, I generally avoid fantasy like the historical plagues I read so much about. That’s not to say I haven’t enjoyed fantasy novels in the past, it’s just that I find them more often than not overly complicated to follow. Combining history and fantasy is to my mind, a big call, yet Kate has pulled it off very well. The story is authentic to its historical setting as well as being deeply atmospheric in terms of mystical content. I particularly enjoyed the sections that detailed the study of alchemy and prophecy.
I did find the story to be rather fast paced, and while this in no way impeded my ability to follow the events, I do think it impacted on both character and plot depth. It seemed at times as though Kate was holding back and I longed for her to have just dug in a little deeper. But I’m used to historicals that are longer and more explorative so my expectations may simply be in line with that. I also found at times there was a bit of head hopping within scenes. These are minor issues though when you consider the fantastical scope and historical detail of this novel, particularly within the framework of it being a debut offering.
I’m quite looking forward to seeing what Kate will produce for us next as I think she shows a lot of promise within the historical fantasy genre. She has a deft hand when it comes to setting scenes, particularly those that involve nature and mystical conjurings. Overall, Stone Circle was a very enjoyable read and I wish Kate all the best for success with its release and eagerly await her next novel.
Thanks is extended to the author and Fireship Press for providing me with a copy of Stone Circle for review.
Stone Circle is book 72 in my 2017 Australian Women Writers Challenge
August 10, 2017
Consider trying to weigh what you value more: truth or privacy?
In a life ruled by class, young Antonius is lucky to find work. His father is dead and his family must eat. Aware that he should count his blessings, being a servant in the home of Conte Valperga isn’t the only thing Antonius has been blessed with.
When a competition is posted, Antonius takes his chance to rise above societal constraints. Using his mind-reading talents, he lunges into a fierce rivalry. He competes for pride, approval, and the love of their mentor’s daughter, Giulia. Antonius must learn which blessings he cannot take for granted.
Author Kate Murdoch presents to us a relatable story of love and betrayal, acceptance and rejection. Her characters navigate these challenges with the ability to read thoughts, and the intrusion of having their own secrets exposed. Each character is layered with rich, multi-faceted traits that demonstrates Murdoch’s exceptional command of both creative writing and the human spirit.
This book is well-suited for a book club. On its surface, the story sails along without pausing, leaving the reader little time to weigh the underlying questions that beg for group discussion. Do you value truth over privacy? Can you ever forgive an act of betrayal from someone you love, someone you believed loved you in return?
In a life ruled by class, young Antonius is lucky to find work. His father is dead and his family must eat. Aware that he should count his blessings, being a servant in the home of Conte Valperga isn’t the only thing Antonius has been blessed with.
When a competition is posted, Antonius takes his chance to rise above societal constraints. Using his mind-reading talents, he lunges into a fierce rivalry. He competes for pride, approval, and the love of their mentor’s daughter, Giulia. Antonius must learn which blessings he cannot take for granted.
Author Kate Murdoch presents to us a relatable story of love and betrayal, acceptance and rejection. Her characters navigate these challenges with the ability to read thoughts, and the intrusion of having their own secrets exposed. Each character is layered with rich, multi-faceted traits that demonstrates Murdoch’s exceptional command of both creative writing and the human spirit.
This book is well-suited for a book club. On its surface, the story sails along without pausing, leaving the reader little time to weigh the underlying questions that beg for group discussion. Do you value truth over privacy? Can you ever forgive an act of betrayal from someone you love, someone you believed loved you in return?
May 9, 2021
Antonius🐺🍆⛲ and Giulia💃💋💘
ADULT Historical Paranormal Fantasy🌈, Romance💕, and Adventure
Italy 1585.
The book follows the early life of Antonius🐺🍆⛲, a young man who has the gift of a powerful seer, of seeing the future, of knowing, mind reading , of even shapeshifting, but his powers are undeveloped. He needs a teacher, a mentor.
Luckily, there is Savinus👴, a well respected older man who is a long established seer. His daughter, Giulia,💃💋 also has the gift, but being a woman, she would have surely been accused of witchcraft, so she keeps her gifts hidden.
Nichola👺,The son of the local comte, has some talent, but he also has a personality of entitlement, and disdain for everyone but himself.
Most of the book is about the clash between the sweet and talented peasant boy, Antonius🐺🍆⛲, and Nichola👺, the arrogant and jealous son of the comte.
ARC Provided by Book📚 Sirens 💃
I also got this ebook with KU.
I really enjoyed this well written and interesting book.
ADULT Historical Paranormal Fantasy🌈, Romance💕, and Adventure
Italy 1585.
The book follows the early life of Antonius🐺🍆⛲, a young man who has the gift of a powerful seer, of seeing the future, of knowing, mind reading , of even shapeshifting, but his powers are undeveloped. He needs a teacher, a mentor.
Luckily, there is Savinus👴, a well respected older man who is a long established seer. His daughter, Giulia,💃💋 also has the gift, but being a woman, she would have surely been accused of witchcraft, so she keeps her gifts hidden.
Nichola👺,The son of the local comte, has some talent, but he also has a personality of entitlement, and disdain for everyone but himself.
Most of the book is about the clash between the sweet and talented peasant boy, Antonius🐺🍆⛲, and Nichola👺, the arrogant and jealous son of the comte.
ARC Provided by Book📚 Sirens 💃
I also got this ebook with KU.
I really enjoyed this well written and interesting book.
March 9, 2018
Antonius works as a servant in Palazzo. When he wins an apprenticeship with the town seer he does not anticipating sharing first place with his employer, the Conte Valperga’s son. As their knowledge of magic and alchemy deepens, so does their rivalry for the seers lovely daughter. A rivalry which will threaten family and draw the attention of the church to their hidden practices.
In Stone Circle, Kate Murdoch paints a sumptuous Renaissance world - so rich that her fantasy elements seem to blend with the contemporary foods, fashion and social practices of the day. Murdoch writes in a deft omniscient voice moving between characters with ease. The exquisite detail and richly imagined magical realm lift this simple love story above the ordinary, imbuing the reader with a gentle spiritual wisdom. I look forward reading more from this author.
In Stone Circle, Kate Murdoch paints a sumptuous Renaissance world - so rich that her fantasy elements seem to blend with the contemporary foods, fashion and social practices of the day. Murdoch writes in a deft omniscient voice moving between characters with ease. The exquisite detail and richly imagined magical realm lift this simple love story above the ordinary, imbuing the reader with a gentle spiritual wisdom. I look forward reading more from this author.
December 19, 2017
Stone Circle is Kate Murdoch's debut novel. I thought it was good. I found this magical and historical combination to be an easy read. I enjoyed the beautiful setting and 16th century time period. Antonius is a good character that I connected with. He needed to find his way and find where he belonged.
I would give Stone Circle four stars. I hope to see more by Kate Murdoch and see where else her imagination goes to next.
I received this book from the publisher. This review is 100% my own honest opinion.
I would give Stone Circle four stars. I hope to see more by Kate Murdoch and see where else her imagination goes to next.
I received this book from the publisher. This review is 100% my own honest opinion.
June 28, 2018
This book has received a Discovering Diamonds Review:
Helen Hollick
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'...a solid debut novel; it is pacey and illustrates well the difference between the wealthy and the poor in 16th Century Italy'
Helen Hollick
founder #DDRevs
'...a solid debut novel; it is pacey and illustrates well the difference between the wealthy and the poor in 16th Century Italy'
June 24, 2021
STONE CIRCLE is the amazing debut novel by Kate Murdoch. It details the lives of people in a small town in Italy during the 16th century.
Savinus is a well-renowned seer, with a rich and powerful patron. When he needs an apprentice, he holds a test to find someone suitable. Antonius is by far the better apprentice but so as not to offend his patron, Savinus accepts Nichola as his second apprentice.
What a story this was. I loved every word, from beginning to end. The main characters are easy to like (or dislike!) and are helped by the supporting ones. The story moves along at a steady pace, giving the reader time to understand all the nuances as they read. There is tension woven within the words, knowing and yet not knowing what the outcome will be.
I thought this was a brilliant story that I was thoroughly engrossed in. I really hope it is not the last book with these characters. I know we were given hints of their futures, but I would love to return to them at some point. Fly high, eagle!
A fantastic novel that I highly recommend.
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Merissa
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Savinus is a well-renowned seer, with a rich and powerful patron. When he needs an apprentice, he holds a test to find someone suitable. Antonius is by far the better apprentice but so as not to offend his patron, Savinus accepts Nichola as his second apprentice.
What a story this was. I loved every word, from beginning to end. The main characters are easy to like (or dislike!) and are helped by the supporting ones. The story moves along at a steady pace, giving the reader time to understand all the nuances as they read. There is tension woven within the words, knowing and yet not knowing what the outcome will be.
I thought this was a brilliant story that I was thoroughly engrossed in. I really hope it is not the last book with these characters. I know we were given hints of their futures, but I would love to return to them at some point. Fly high, eagle!
A fantastic novel that I highly recommend.
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* A copy of this book was provided to me with no requirements for a review. I voluntarily read this book, and the comments here are my honest opinion. *
Merissa
Archaeolibrarian - I Dig Good Books!
December 12, 2017
Kate Murdoch’s historical fantasy Stone Circle is abundant with historical and descriptive detail, painting vivid pictures of sixteenth-century Italy and the lives of alchemists, seers and servants. Stone Circle reminds me of a still life or a landscape – for as a portrait of its characters, it doesn’t have the same richness and depth and the central love triangle theme doesn’t pull as much weight as I would have liked. Nonetheless, it’s an interesting historical read and I liked it particularly because Kate made me imagine.
March 12, 2018
Stone Circle by Kate Murdoch is a mixture of fantasy, historical fiction and coming-of-age set in Itlay during the 16th century. It is a fascinating story of a young man’s first steps into adulthood.
Antonius has always known he was special. He can hear others thoughts. So when he finds out that the local seer, Savinus, is having a trial to accept a new apprentice he is eager to go. Once Antonius demonstrates his abilities to the seer, there is no question who will be the next apprentice. However, the Conte’s son, who is a major employer of Savinus, also shows a small amount of talent. Rank is everything in this society and the seer is left with no choice but to accept both as apprentices.
Based solely on skill, Nichola, the Conte’s son is to be the secondary apprentice and Antonius the primary. As you can imagine, this does not go over well with Nichola. He has lived a life of privilege and always gotten all the things he wants. In other words, he is spoiled. This leads to a rivalry between to two and only gets worse when they both fall for Savinus’s beautiful daughter Giulia. Nichola, being of questionable character, takes extra ordinary measures to make life difficult for Antonius. He will stop short of nothing to have Giulia.
The story was imaginative and original. The author did a wonderful job of mixing the historical elements with the fantasy elements. In particular, I appreciate that the author made an effort to present the times in a factual way such as the use of alchemy which at that time was considered a science and studied as such. The pace of the plot was just right. The only negative, and it is very minor, I felt some of the characters could have been represented better. Overall it is a good story and I see a variety of readers enjoying.
The book crosses beyond the boundary of traditional fantasy; therefore, as stated above, I can see it appealing to a variety of readers. I recommend this to anyone you likes historical fiction and fantasy. If you are like me and enjoy both, you need to read this book.
Note: My rating is 4.5 but I have rounded up here because I feel it is closer to 5 stars than 4 stars.
I received a free copy from the author in exchange for my honest review.
For more of my reviews, and author interviews, see my blog at www.thespineview.com
Antonius has always known he was special. He can hear others thoughts. So when he finds out that the local seer, Savinus, is having a trial to accept a new apprentice he is eager to go. Once Antonius demonstrates his abilities to the seer, there is no question who will be the next apprentice. However, the Conte’s son, who is a major employer of Savinus, also shows a small amount of talent. Rank is everything in this society and the seer is left with no choice but to accept both as apprentices.
Based solely on skill, Nichola, the Conte’s son is to be the secondary apprentice and Antonius the primary. As you can imagine, this does not go over well with Nichola. He has lived a life of privilege and always gotten all the things he wants. In other words, he is spoiled. This leads to a rivalry between to two and only gets worse when they both fall for Savinus’s beautiful daughter Giulia. Nichola, being of questionable character, takes extra ordinary measures to make life difficult for Antonius. He will stop short of nothing to have Giulia.
The story was imaginative and original. The author did a wonderful job of mixing the historical elements with the fantasy elements. In particular, I appreciate that the author made an effort to present the times in a factual way such as the use of alchemy which at that time was considered a science and studied as such. The pace of the plot was just right. The only negative, and it is very minor, I felt some of the characters could have been represented better. Overall it is a good story and I see a variety of readers enjoying.
The book crosses beyond the boundary of traditional fantasy; therefore, as stated above, I can see it appealing to a variety of readers. I recommend this to anyone you likes historical fiction and fantasy. If you are like me and enjoy both, you need to read this book.
Note: My rating is 4.5 but I have rounded up here because I feel it is closer to 5 stars than 4 stars.
I received a free copy from the author in exchange for my honest review.
For more of my reviews, and author interviews, see my blog at www.thespineview.com
April 17, 2018
I’ve just finished Stone Circle, by Kate Murdoch, an inspiring debut novel set in the heart of Renaissance Italy (1585 AD). The Story begins in a peaceful, everyday setting, in which we meet Savinus, the powerful local Seer, and his beautiful and equally as talented daughter, Giuila.
After testing several boys for Seer-like abilities, two apprentices are chosen- Nichola (son of the Conte: a noble by birth), and Antonius (a poor young man with a kind heart and an extraordinary set of abilities.)
I found myself warming to Antonius immediately, though I could not say the same for Nichola. His spite and intense self-interest make him an easy character to hate. While Antonius is modest, caring and a little bit shy, Nichola is boastful of his station, refuses to see events from any other perspective than his own jaded one, and treats those considered ‘beneath’ him like dirt.
At every corner, Antonius triumphs in his studies, while Nichola struggles. It’s almost as if Nichola’s bad karma is stunting his unique skills and it doesn’t get any better for him as the story continues. We see Nichola often refer to Antonius as a slave or kitchen-hand, promising to ‘show him his place.’
I found Giuila’s character to be of sound mind (for the most part), and even with a sudden onset of naivety when someone special catches her eye, Giuila soon returns from cloud nine, to realize that the reality of things contrasts strongly to her supposed love.
Every other character in the book, including the nobility (bar Nichola) is polite and courteous to those deemed lower in station than themselves, with the majority of the rich folk actually appreciating what they have. Whether this is realistic of Renaissance Italy, I cannot say, but it makes for a refreshing change from the majority of spoilt rich characters that we read about today.
Everything from the well-crafted plot, to the tension building and high stakes, had me yearning for more and I can’t wait to see what else Kate Murdoch comes up with.
Definitely one of my favourite reads this year. If you haven’t heard of Kate Murdoch, I suggest you look her up on Goodreads or Amazon, or at her website.
My rating? 5 Stars!
After testing several boys for Seer-like abilities, two apprentices are chosen- Nichola (son of the Conte: a noble by birth), and Antonius (a poor young man with a kind heart and an extraordinary set of abilities.)
I found myself warming to Antonius immediately, though I could not say the same for Nichola. His spite and intense self-interest make him an easy character to hate. While Antonius is modest, caring and a little bit shy, Nichola is boastful of his station, refuses to see events from any other perspective than his own jaded one, and treats those considered ‘beneath’ him like dirt.
At every corner, Antonius triumphs in his studies, while Nichola struggles. It’s almost as if Nichola’s bad karma is stunting his unique skills and it doesn’t get any better for him as the story continues. We see Nichola often refer to Antonius as a slave or kitchen-hand, promising to ‘show him his place.’
I found Giuila’s character to be of sound mind (for the most part), and even with a sudden onset of naivety when someone special catches her eye, Giuila soon returns from cloud nine, to realize that the reality of things contrasts strongly to her supposed love.
Every other character in the book, including the nobility (bar Nichola) is polite and courteous to those deemed lower in station than themselves, with the majority of the rich folk actually appreciating what they have. Whether this is realistic of Renaissance Italy, I cannot say, but it makes for a refreshing change from the majority of spoilt rich characters that we read about today.
Everything from the well-crafted plot, to the tension building and high stakes, had me yearning for more and I can’t wait to see what else Kate Murdoch comes up with.
Definitely one of my favourite reads this year. If you haven’t heard of Kate Murdoch, I suggest you look her up on Goodreads or Amazon, or at her website.
My rating? 5 Stars!
December 9, 2017
In Renaissance Italy in the village of Pesaro, Seer Savinus is looking for someone who shares his talents for divining the future so he is able to cultivate the next generation and Seers. Savinus' daughter, Guilia is talented, however, women in the trade are simply not respected. Savinus decides to hold a competition. One of Pesaro's noble family's son, Nichola Valperga competes as well as a servant in the Valperga household, Antonious. Antonious has far more ability in the field and is recognized right away by Savinus. Nichola has limited ability, but Savinus agrees to apprentice Nichola as the secondary apprentice out of respect to the noble family. From the start the two young men are at odds, Nichola can not stand that a servant has a position above him and Antonious can not understand Nichola's haughty nature. Tensions rise as Giulia's affections towards one apprentice emerge and jealousy leads to violence.
Stone Circle immersed me into 16th century Italy and the alchemy practices of the time. I was surprised to learn the esteemed role that Seer's played in the society and that they were often employed by nobles to learn the best time for special events to take place and even who they should marry. Savinus was my favorite character, wise and conscientious in his choices, helped along by his psychic abilities. Antonius and Nichola were typical young men, but their strained relationship demonstrated the division between classes at the time. I was waiting for one of them to compromise on their differences as so many of the adult characters suggested. Guilia was an interesting character for me, I really wanted her to take a more prominent role in her father's practice rather than simply be a love interest; however she did show insight and grow as she realized the apprentices true nature. Jealousy was a theme throughout the story, and it was one that had dire consequences. It was interesting to see that even with magic and alchemy all of your problems could not be fixed. Overall, an engrossing story that mixes history, magic and romance.
This book was received for free in return for an honest review.
Stone Circle immersed me into 16th century Italy and the alchemy practices of the time. I was surprised to learn the esteemed role that Seer's played in the society and that they were often employed by nobles to learn the best time for special events to take place and even who they should marry. Savinus was my favorite character, wise and conscientious in his choices, helped along by his psychic abilities. Antonius and Nichola were typical young men, but their strained relationship demonstrated the division between classes at the time. I was waiting for one of them to compromise on their differences as so many of the adult characters suggested. Guilia was an interesting character for me, I really wanted her to take a more prominent role in her father's practice rather than simply be a love interest; however she did show insight and grow as she realized the apprentices true nature. Jealousy was a theme throughout the story, and it was one that had dire consequences. It was interesting to see that even with magic and alchemy all of your problems could not be fixed. Overall, an engrossing story that mixes history, magic and romance.
This book was received for free in return for an honest review.
October 25, 2017
A copy of this review can be found at Book Ink Reviews.
Thank you to Kate Murdoch and Fireship Press for this free ARC in exchange for a requested honest review.
Kate Murdoch is a renowned painter, and it absolutely shines in this depiction of a gorgeous Italian setting.
Stone Circle will place you right in the Italian countryside while also bringing up the nostalgia of reading Tom Sawyer for the first time. The novel winnows seamlessly between the entire cast of characters' perspectives using a third-person, omniscient style.
I never really cared for anyone except the Seer and his daughter, Guilia. Antonio had some growth and strength of character, but for the most part was still very young and immature in his dealings with his rival Nichola. From the very start, I despised Nichola and was not at all surprised at how the novel played out when it came to his character, though I felt he deserved...more. Yet I can understand the complexity of their immaturity because they can all read minds. There are no secrets: causing hatred and love to be as obvious as night and day.
But what Stone Circle lacks in depth of character, it makes up for in gorgeous depictions, a clever premise, and a focus on a young boy becoming a man and learning to hone his craft. This is the perfect book to escape into for a vacation from your living room.
Thank you to Kate Murdoch and Fireship Press for this free ARC in exchange for a requested honest review.
Kate Murdoch is a renowned painter, and it absolutely shines in this depiction of a gorgeous Italian setting.
Stone Circle will place you right in the Italian countryside while also bringing up the nostalgia of reading Tom Sawyer for the first time. The novel winnows seamlessly between the entire cast of characters' perspectives using a third-person, omniscient style.
I never really cared for anyone except the Seer and his daughter, Guilia. Antonio had some growth and strength of character, but for the most part was still very young and immature in his dealings with his rival Nichola. From the very start, I despised Nichola and was not at all surprised at how the novel played out when it came to his character, though I felt he deserved...more. Yet I can understand the complexity of their immaturity because they can all read minds. There are no secrets: causing hatred and love to be as obvious as night and day.
But what Stone Circle lacks in depth of character, it makes up for in gorgeous depictions, a clever premise, and a focus on a young boy becoming a man and learning to hone his craft. This is the perfect book to escape into for a vacation from your living room.
December 16, 2017
Set in Pesaro in 1585, this is a novel of magic, love, and jealousy, as the town's seer Savinus seeks his successor. Two boys are chosen -- Antonius, whose powers of mind-reading equal Savinus's own; and Nichola, the Conte's son, and whom Savinus cannot refuse, without risking his patronage. Antonius's superiority to Nichola is evident from the start, in all matters; however, this is not enough for Savinus's daughter Giulia, who falls in love with Nichola. All he seems to have going for him is money. Even his father the Conte despairs of him, as he doesn't even measure up to his older brother Gianni, who has more integrity.
The story begins with a prologue that intrigues. Nichola knocks Antonius overboard while out paddling in a boat, and despite an attempt by Savinus to save him, Antonius watches them paddle away, leaving him behind in a magical blue cave. The book then begins one year earlier, and we learn of the divide between classes, especially evident in the food they can expect to eat; the church's fear of the occult; and men's control of women's movements.
Kate's writing is rich with sensory, beautiful images, and I look forward to reading more from her.
The story begins with a prologue that intrigues. Nichola knocks Antonius overboard while out paddling in a boat, and despite an attempt by Savinus to save him, Antonius watches them paddle away, leaving him behind in a magical blue cave. The book then begins one year earlier, and we learn of the divide between classes, especially evident in the food they can expect to eat; the church's fear of the occult; and men's control of women's movements.
Kate's writing is rich with sensory, beautiful images, and I look forward to reading more from her.
December 13, 2017
Stone Circle, historical fantasy, is set in Renaissance Italy. Two students of the town seer—one rich and one poor—compete for love. Kate gives the readers insight to social mores of the 1500s and their approach to women, disabilities and mystics. The fantasy elements are shown in a realistic fashion as an extension of science/alchemy. Antonius, the protagonist, is a gentle young man learning to deal with opposition and trying to better his lot in life. His love interest, Giulia, is a talented woman, ahead of her times. Nichola, the spoilt son of a nobleman, is used to getting everything he wants. The dynamics between this trio keeps tension boiling.
January 2, 2018
Stone Circle transports you to a magical time and place in coastal Italy. A story of relationships, love and family, the prose is beautifully written, and plot draws you along the the inevitable climax. An great book for all ages - interesting, thought provoking and thoroughly enjoyable.
August 22, 2019
Loved this one. It's a little overly descriptive in places, but the story more than makes up for that. I wouldn't have minded it being twice as long, and going into more details on certain developments, background stories, the magic elements, and I really wish for some sort of sequel, because I want to know what becomes of the characters.
December 20, 2017
Where shall I start? Hmmmm. I am having a hard time thinking today! All this xmas madness of course. It might have to do with that and the fact I am scared to giveaway any spoilers D: there are so many I want to spill. So I shall try my best.
So, this story follows two men who have the gift of sight and they become apprentices so they can strengthen their skills. This is a once in a lifetime chance to be taught by the best in the country. The men picked is a peasant and the other a noble’s son. Trouble ensues in many shapes and forms. How did their mentor NOT see that coming picking such men? You don’t have to be a seer to see that this was a bad idea from the start. Alas, it happens and things happen because of jealousy, hatred, and love.
I felt bad for Antonius because he legit wanted to better himself and his family. This was supposed to be extra money and building on his skills. Snotface McGee, aka Nicola, has to ruin everything because he can’t stand that he has to work side-by-side with a peasant. Get over yourself…you are only there because your mentor is working for your Daddy. Little snot.
As you can tell I have no love for him. LOL He was a horrible, horrible little man.
I lost a lot of respect for Guilia she was so shallow for a while there. She got better later on in the book when she learned the error of her ways. It took a while though.
Yes, there was some romance mixed in all this, but it didn’t take over the story, so I was happy with that. I also really loved the magical element mixed in. It worked well! It wasn’t cheesy or anything…it worked well.
It took a while for the story to warm-up, but after a few chapters I was absolutely hooked and read this within a couple sittings. I had to know what was going to happen. Well, I knew what was going to happen, but I had no idea how the author was going to get us there and so I was curious and anxious to find out.
The ending…sighs…I’m glad I got partially what I wanted, but no. No. He needs more of a punishment. I was not okay with one character’s fate. I will not say more because I feel a spoiler about to come out.
Overall, this was pretty good. I was frustrated with the fate of a character and it took a bit to get hooked, but when I did get hooked I was hooked like a warm on the fishing pool. I had to keep reading even when it was WAY past my bedtime. If you like a little magic, drama, and romance all in one…this is for you. I’ll stamp this with 4 stars.
So, this story follows two men who have the gift of sight and they become apprentices so they can strengthen their skills. This is a once in a lifetime chance to be taught by the best in the country. The men picked is a peasant and the other a noble’s son. Trouble ensues in many shapes and forms. How did their mentor NOT see that coming picking such men? You don’t have to be a seer to see that this was a bad idea from the start. Alas, it happens and things happen because of jealousy, hatred, and love.
I felt bad for Antonius because he legit wanted to better himself and his family. This was supposed to be extra money and building on his skills. Snotface McGee, aka Nicola, has to ruin everything because he can’t stand that he has to work side-by-side with a peasant. Get over yourself…you are only there because your mentor is working for your Daddy. Little snot.
As you can tell I have no love for him. LOL He was a horrible, horrible little man.
I lost a lot of respect for Guilia she was so shallow for a while there. She got better later on in the book when she learned the error of her ways. It took a while though.
Yes, there was some romance mixed in all this, but it didn’t take over the story, so I was happy with that. I also really loved the magical element mixed in. It worked well! It wasn’t cheesy or anything…it worked well.
It took a while for the story to warm-up, but after a few chapters I was absolutely hooked and read this within a couple sittings. I had to know what was going to happen. Well, I knew what was going to happen, but I had no idea how the author was going to get us there and so I was curious and anxious to find out.
The ending…sighs…I’m glad I got partially what I wanted, but no. No. He needs more of a punishment. I was not okay with one character’s fate. I will not say more because I feel a spoiler about to come out.
Overall, this was pretty good. I was frustrated with the fate of a character and it took a bit to get hooked, but when I did get hooked I was hooked like a warm on the fishing pool. I had to keep reading even when it was WAY past my bedtime. If you like a little magic, drama, and romance all in one…this is for you. I’ll stamp this with 4 stars.
March 25, 2018
I was initially hesitant to read Stone Circle as I do not usually gravitate towards the fantasy genre, but Murdoch’s ability to weave historical fiction into the story made it easy for me to understand the fantasy elements while still enjoying the plot...
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May 28, 2021
"It's all right, Signor. I understand you are in a difficult position. You don't need to explain anything to me. If Nichola is my only difficulty, then life is not too bad."
🌼Short plot summary:
👁️The sixteenth century Pesaro is a place where seers are highly appraised by ordinary people, whilst being oppressed and closely watched by the vigilant eyes of the Church, and Signor Savino de Benevolent is one of them.
👁️Finding himself in need of an apprentice that could someday take his place, Savino organizes a seeing contest, in order to discover and choose the most suitable candidate.
👁️The competition can be considered a success, as Savino finds right away the most powerful of the twenty aspirants in Antonius, a humble boy, working as a servant in the kitchen of the Palazzo Ducal, domain of Conte Valperga. The only problem is that Nichola Valperga, Conte Valperga's son, is also a competitor and, as weak and vague his power is, sending him home is not an option. That's why Savino accepts two apprentices, explaining from the very start that Antonius is the first apprentice, the one that would take over when he retired, and Nichola is the second one.
👁️Accustomed to an aristocratic lifestyle and to staring people down, Nichola develops an endless hate and envy towards Antonius, who, in Nichola's opinion, should limit to wiping his shoes clean. The animosity between the two of them is deepened by their rivalry regarding Giulia, Savino's beautiful, smart, talented, brave and fierce redhead daughter. Soon, the innocent bickering between the two apprentices turns into something more dangerous, as there's nothing that Nichola wouldn't do for victory.
👁️But how ruthless can Nichola really get?
Will Antonius, the servant, prove himself better than Conte's son, in a world that revolves around status? Will he master his turning powers in time to save himself and his brother? And who will Giulia choose to be her bethroted (in the end *wink*)?
🌼Highlights:
📜Piero. Piero's disability made me love and care for him from the first page where he was mentioned. It's only natural to become overprotective of a sick child, abused and bullied because of his uniqueness. Him being different and, therefore, impossible to understand by other children, made him painfully relatable. This is every bullied child's struggle, but the fact that he had that cognitive deficiency and so he was basically defenseless broke my heart.
That's why, when Nichola picked on him, I went mad. I've been already hating on him, don't fret, but picking on Piero BECAUSE of his helplessness, that was the filthiest, lowest and spineless thing he could have done. Shame on him! Pathetic.
Anyway, what happened after, with the asylum, was brilliant. I applaude the author's way of deepening the intrigue. It would have been quite disappointing if the whole storyline consisted of the Giulia-Nichola, Giulia-Antonius ping-pong. Well, it did not. And I'm glad.
"I be sick."
"No, you won't. Like they said, you'll get used to it, along with the Bible reading and the torture. Welcome to hell on earth, my friend."
📜Nichola is despicable! I felt the urge to say it again and, also, to present this as a positive aspect of the book. You have to appreciate when you really hate the character that was meant to be hated, right? Well, I despise Nichola Valperga with the heat of a thousand suns. So we're good.
"For the first time in his life, he felt insignificant. A servant who collected his chamber pots had usurped him. Grief held him still."
📜The description of Pesaro, the whole world building is amazing, really. While reading, I could picture everything in my head: the grass, the flowers, the buildings, the dresses, the trees. And it has the perfect amount of text reserved for details and descriptions, enough to fully immerse you into the story but not enough to bore you to death.
📜More POV's, very nicely intertwined. The story is fluid, there are not unanswered questions or plot holes, establishing a refreshing equilibrium between things that go very wrong and things that go right.
🌼Dislikes:
👀Predictability. I'm not dumb, but this ending was easy to foresee without using too many brain cells. All the problems were resolved right away, Antonius and Nichola were always acting and reacting in the most obvious way, Giulia ended up doing what everyone knew she would end up doing. If you're looking for an easy read, it's fine. This is not a real problem. It is just MY problem. I'm a little more complicated human being and I crave books that give me a bit of a shake, that have a bit of spice, that make me stop for a second and go "what??!". Although I must admit that everything going as planned and knowing that no matter the obstacles your happy-ending awaits is quite satisfying.
🙋♀️! Spoilers ahead !🙋♀️
👀Giulia's personality. This. This right here was my biggest pet peeve. From the start, she is presented to us like an intelligent, rebel and grounded young woman. And then she hoes after Nichola?? Yes, not "goes" . Hoes. Her attraction to him is described at first sight. That, I can understand. But, soon after, she sees he is a snob and that he envies Antonius (why couldn't she read his mind, I wonder), and still throws herself all over him. It is insisted so much on chastity and a girl's honor, and the next second you see her allowing Nichola to kiss and grope her because his homme fatale aura has clogged her mind. Seriously? At some point every conversation they had made me roll my eyes, because I was so damn frustrated by her blindness! And I could had understood even this shallowness, if she wasn't supposed to be so decent, honorable, sensible, and smart. Maybe my hate for Nichola played a role in my disapproval of her behavior, but who does that?! He forces himself on her, touches her here and there, and she laughs and jokes about his naughtiness. Yes, folks.
And not only that. She accepts his proposal. Yes, you heard it well. She says "yes" to this pig. 🙃
There's more! This smart, decent and very much in love human, decides to despise her fiancee because of a dream in which he pushes someone off a boat. As happy as I am that things turned out this way, what in the world is her logic about? They haven't mentioned the premonition was about dying by drowning, which would have made everything more serious. It was solely about falling off the boat. Maybe we were supposed to deduct that, since Antonius could not swim, he would have died after falling into the water? I don't know. Perhaps. The cert thing is that he tried to combat the threat announced by the premonition by learning how to swim. And guess who comes running to keep him afloat - our chaste and heartbroken Giulia.
And what does she do, after suddenly deciding she doesn't want her fiancee anymore because he pushes someone out off a boat in her dream? She throws herself over Antonius and cries tears of love. See? I told you it was predictable.
"He pedalled his legs at a frantic pace as he attempted to keep up. It was hard to decide which was worse - staying in the water as his legs weakened, or returning to the shore and trying to disguise his arousal." This scene had me laughing out loud. Hilarious.
Maybe I was a little bit too incisive, but she is clearly not my favorite character. Also, she is the main reason why I'm giving this book 3.5 stars. Otherwise, the original plot line, interesting characters, everlasting social issues, historical depictions, family relationships, the secret unique powers, the mind reading, the love triangle trope, there are plenty of great things that made me appreciate the Stone Circle.
🌼All in all, this was an enjoyable and relaxing read and I sincerely think Kate Murdoch has done a great job with this debut novel! I really hope she doesn't stop here, because I'm quite ready to discover new places through her wonderful descriptions. 🌸
🌼Short plot summary:
👁️The sixteenth century Pesaro is a place where seers are highly appraised by ordinary people, whilst being oppressed and closely watched by the vigilant eyes of the Church, and Signor Savino de Benevolent is one of them.
👁️Finding himself in need of an apprentice that could someday take his place, Savino organizes a seeing contest, in order to discover and choose the most suitable candidate.
👁️The competition can be considered a success, as Savino finds right away the most powerful of the twenty aspirants in Antonius, a humble boy, working as a servant in the kitchen of the Palazzo Ducal, domain of Conte Valperga. The only problem is that Nichola Valperga, Conte Valperga's son, is also a competitor and, as weak and vague his power is, sending him home is not an option. That's why Savino accepts two apprentices, explaining from the very start that Antonius is the first apprentice, the one that would take over when he retired, and Nichola is the second one.
👁️Accustomed to an aristocratic lifestyle and to staring people down, Nichola develops an endless hate and envy towards Antonius, who, in Nichola's opinion, should limit to wiping his shoes clean. The animosity between the two of them is deepened by their rivalry regarding Giulia, Savino's beautiful, smart, talented, brave and fierce redhead daughter. Soon, the innocent bickering between the two apprentices turns into something more dangerous, as there's nothing that Nichola wouldn't do for victory.
👁️But how ruthless can Nichola really get?
Will Antonius, the servant, prove himself better than Conte's son, in a world that revolves around status? Will he master his turning powers in time to save himself and his brother? And who will Giulia choose to be her bethroted (in the end *wink*)?
🌼Highlights:
📜Piero. Piero's disability made me love and care for him from the first page where he was mentioned. It's only natural to become overprotective of a sick child, abused and bullied because of his uniqueness. Him being different and, therefore, impossible to understand by other children, made him painfully relatable. This is every bullied child's struggle, but the fact that he had that cognitive deficiency and so he was basically defenseless broke my heart.
That's why, when Nichola picked on him, I went mad. I've been already hating on him, don't fret, but picking on Piero BECAUSE of his helplessness, that was the filthiest, lowest and spineless thing he could have done. Shame on him! Pathetic.
Anyway, what happened after, with the asylum, was brilliant. I applaude the author's way of deepening the intrigue. It would have been quite disappointing if the whole storyline consisted of the Giulia-Nichola, Giulia-Antonius ping-pong. Well, it did not. And I'm glad.
"I be sick."
"No, you won't. Like they said, you'll get used to it, along with the Bible reading and the torture. Welcome to hell on earth, my friend."
📜Nichola is despicable! I felt the urge to say it again and, also, to present this as a positive aspect of the book. You have to appreciate when you really hate the character that was meant to be hated, right? Well, I despise Nichola Valperga with the heat of a thousand suns. So we're good.
"For the first time in his life, he felt insignificant. A servant who collected his chamber pots had usurped him. Grief held him still."
📜The description of Pesaro, the whole world building is amazing, really. While reading, I could picture everything in my head: the grass, the flowers, the buildings, the dresses, the trees. And it has the perfect amount of text reserved for details and descriptions, enough to fully immerse you into the story but not enough to bore you to death.
📜More POV's, very nicely intertwined. The story is fluid, there are not unanswered questions or plot holes, establishing a refreshing equilibrium between things that go very wrong and things that go right.
🌼Dislikes:
👀Predictability. I'm not dumb, but this ending was easy to foresee without using too many brain cells. All the problems were resolved right away, Antonius and Nichola were always acting and reacting in the most obvious way, Giulia ended up doing what everyone knew she would end up doing. If you're looking for an easy read, it's fine. This is not a real problem. It is just MY problem. I'm a little more complicated human being and I crave books that give me a bit of a shake, that have a bit of spice, that make me stop for a second and go "what??!". Although I must admit that everything going as planned and knowing that no matter the obstacles your happy-ending awaits is quite satisfying.
🙋♀️! Spoilers ahead !🙋♀️
👀Giulia's personality. This. This right here was my biggest pet peeve. From the start, she is presented to us like an intelligent, rebel and grounded young woman. And then she hoes after Nichola?? Yes, not "goes" . Hoes. Her attraction to him is described at first sight. That, I can understand. But, soon after, she sees he is a snob and that he envies Antonius (why couldn't she read his mind, I wonder), and still throws herself all over him. It is insisted so much on chastity and a girl's honor, and the next second you see her allowing Nichola to kiss and grope her because his homme fatale aura has clogged her mind. Seriously? At some point every conversation they had made me roll my eyes, because I was so damn frustrated by her blindness! And I could had understood even this shallowness, if she wasn't supposed to be so decent, honorable, sensible, and smart. Maybe my hate for Nichola played a role in my disapproval of her behavior, but who does that?! He forces himself on her, touches her here and there, and she laughs and jokes about his naughtiness. Yes, folks.
And not only that. She accepts his proposal. Yes, you heard it well. She says "yes" to this pig. 🙃
There's more! This smart, decent and very much in love human, decides to despise her fiancee because of a dream in which he pushes someone off a boat. As happy as I am that things turned out this way, what in the world is her logic about? They haven't mentioned the premonition was about dying by drowning, which would have made everything more serious. It was solely about falling off the boat. Maybe we were supposed to deduct that, since Antonius could not swim, he would have died after falling into the water? I don't know. Perhaps. The cert thing is that he tried to combat the threat announced by the premonition by learning how to swim. And guess who comes running to keep him afloat - our chaste and heartbroken Giulia.
And what does she do, after suddenly deciding she doesn't want her fiancee anymore because he pushes someone out off a boat in her dream? She throws herself over Antonius and cries tears of love. See? I told you it was predictable.
"He pedalled his legs at a frantic pace as he attempted to keep up. It was hard to decide which was worse - staying in the water as his legs weakened, or returning to the shore and trying to disguise his arousal." This scene had me laughing out loud. Hilarious.
Maybe I was a little bit too incisive, but she is clearly not my favorite character. Also, she is the main reason why I'm giving this book 3.5 stars. Otherwise, the original plot line, interesting characters, everlasting social issues, historical depictions, family relationships, the secret unique powers, the mind reading, the love triangle trope, there are plenty of great things that made me appreciate the Stone Circle.
🌼All in all, this was an enjoyable and relaxing read and I sincerely think Kate Murdoch has done a great job with this debut novel! I really hope she doesn't stop here, because I'm quite ready to discover new places through her wonderful descriptions. 🌸
December 1, 2017
Kate Murdoch’s debut novel, Stone Circle, is a piece of lyrical escapism in the genre of historical fantasy. Her vivid imagination sings in this story of two apprentice-seers in Renaissance Italy, vying for the attentions of their master, Savinus, and his daughter, Giulia. The intrigue begins with mind-reading, ramps up with hallucinogenic rituals, and culminates in fantastical shape-shifting from human to animal form.
Antonius is Savinus's preferred apprentice, but underprivileged and obligated to provide for his family including his intellectually disabled brother. Nichola is the wealthy playboy son of the Conte Valperga and a quintessential antagonist. Savinus is the book’s strongest character and we sympathise with his struggle to find a successor in times of escalating Christian power and skepticism for pagans.
The story engages a classic archetype in the hero’s journey, in which we gun for Antonius through his fortunes and misfortunes, hoping, yet all the while knowing, he will prevail in the end. Antonius is caught between a number of worlds – his family, his job at the palazzo, his magical apprenticeship, and his fondness for Giulia. He is likable, but naïve and flawed.
Nichola, on the other hand, has few redeeming features. I struggled to understand what the smart and psychic Giulia saw in him, apart from his wealth, which detracted from her authenticity.
Murdoch is a deft storyteller and Stone Circle is a page-turner. Her prose is lovely and a sensory feast. The themes of love, envy, betrayal and open-heartedness are portrayed well. The fantasy elements draw you in and help to maintain a fine pace. A very enjoyable read for its imagery and escapism.
[Venita read an ARC of Stone Circle in return for an honest review]
Antonius is Savinus's preferred apprentice, but underprivileged and obligated to provide for his family including his intellectually disabled brother. Nichola is the wealthy playboy son of the Conte Valperga and a quintessential antagonist. Savinus is the book’s strongest character and we sympathise with his struggle to find a successor in times of escalating Christian power and skepticism for pagans.
The story engages a classic archetype in the hero’s journey, in which we gun for Antonius through his fortunes and misfortunes, hoping, yet all the while knowing, he will prevail in the end. Antonius is caught between a number of worlds – his family, his job at the palazzo, his magical apprenticeship, and his fondness for Giulia. He is likable, but naïve and flawed.
Nichola, on the other hand, has few redeeming features. I struggled to understand what the smart and psychic Giulia saw in him, apart from his wealth, which detracted from her authenticity.
Murdoch is a deft storyteller and Stone Circle is a page-turner. Her prose is lovely and a sensory feast. The themes of love, envy, betrayal and open-heartedness are portrayed well. The fantasy elements draw you in and help to maintain a fine pace. A very enjoyable read for its imagery and escapism.
[Venita read an ARC of Stone Circle in return for an honest review]
December 2, 2017
One word sums up Stone Circle by Kate Murdoch, and that word is 'enchanting'.
Murdoch's characters are complex, relatable and spectacularly flawed. Infused with fantasy the story dances the line between plot driven and character driven perfectly. I cared just as much about the magic as I did about who got the girl. The female protagonist (not the main character but probably my favourite) is a delightful feminist which is no mean feat in the 1500s. Her suitors are as different as night and day, and even secondary characters are well rounded enough to tug at the heartstrings.
The fantasy elements are fun and thought-provoking. A few serious themes are handled with a delicate, intelligent hand that keeps the book interesting without being heavy. Murdoch flits from one character's perspective to the next in a seamless way that gives body to the narrative.
I'm not usually into novels set hundreds of years ago but this one flows at a quick, captivating pace and doesn't get bogged down with long period descriptions.
Stone Circle is timeless; I stayed up way past my bedtime to read it, which is always a good sign.
Murdoch's characters are complex, relatable and spectacularly flawed. Infused with fantasy the story dances the line between plot driven and character driven perfectly. I cared just as much about the magic as I did about who got the girl. The female protagonist (not the main character but probably my favourite) is a delightful feminist which is no mean feat in the 1500s. Her suitors are as different as night and day, and even secondary characters are well rounded enough to tug at the heartstrings.
The fantasy elements are fun and thought-provoking. A few serious themes are handled with a delicate, intelligent hand that keeps the book interesting without being heavy. Murdoch flits from one character's perspective to the next in a seamless way that gives body to the narrative.
I'm not usually into novels set hundreds of years ago but this one flows at a quick, captivating pace and doesn't get bogged down with long period descriptions.
Stone Circle is timeless; I stayed up way past my bedtime to read it, which is always a good sign.
December 28, 2017
This book made me want to travel back in time to Renaissance Italy and stroll through the bustling streets and the beautiful countryside. The author's depictions of the setting are vivid and well written. The plot kept me engaged and I was only sorry that Christmas festivities kept me from finishing it sooner. The food references throughout the book had me craving polenta and prosciutto! There were moments in the book that really moved me, particularly the storyline surrounding Piero.
September 3, 2018
The first thing that struck me about the book was how much I liked the cover. It's simple, uncrowded and professional-looking.
But that aside...
The book begins with an insight into the main character, Antonius, and we are eager to know him better. The family background is handy because it comes in later in the book, particularly regarding the plot with his brother.
We are guided to genuinely care about most of the characters, particularly Antonius and his mentor, and we feel their pain as they face challenges through the book. The antagonist is a vile bully who, like all bullies, is a coward who preys on the helpless. The author portrays him very well, while also encouraging a small slither of sympathy towards him, but this is soon put out after a particular occurence.
I found one part of the story very hard to bear. Without giving spoilers, it's difficult to describe, but the author portrays the heartbreaking plight with sensitivity and care.
When discussing the latest stories with Crowvus authors, I insist that the 'baddy' gets their just comeuppance. This is more important the nastier they are. I feel that the antagonist in "Stone Circle" does not get his just deserts. At best, it is left ambiguous whether he will or not after the story has finished. I find this part of the story quite disappointing.
Overall, however, I enjoyed reading "Stone Circle" and I'm sure we will hear much more from the debut author as the years progress. The writing flows well and before you know it, you have come to the end of the book after travelling back to Renaissance Italy.
But that aside...
The book begins with an insight into the main character, Antonius, and we are eager to know him better. The family background is handy because it comes in later in the book, particularly regarding the plot with his brother.
We are guided to genuinely care about most of the characters, particularly Antonius and his mentor, and we feel their pain as they face challenges through the book. The antagonist is a vile bully who, like all bullies, is a coward who preys on the helpless. The author portrays him very well, while also encouraging a small slither of sympathy towards him, but this is soon put out after a particular occurence.
I found one part of the story very hard to bear. Without giving spoilers, it's difficult to describe, but the author portrays the heartbreaking plight with sensitivity and care.
When discussing the latest stories with Crowvus authors, I insist that the 'baddy' gets their just comeuppance. This is more important the nastier they are. I feel that the antagonist in "Stone Circle" does not get his just deserts. At best, it is left ambiguous whether he will or not after the story has finished. I find this part of the story quite disappointing.
Overall, however, I enjoyed reading "Stone Circle" and I'm sure we will hear much more from the debut author as the years progress. The writing flows well and before you know it, you have come to the end of the book after travelling back to Renaissance Italy.
March 29, 2019
Historical fiction with some fantasy for added spice: I am tempted to say it's the 16th century Italian version of Camelot, complete with Savinus as the Renaissance Merlin. But there is quite a different vision to this story, and hereditary kingship is not among the qualities to be celebrated.
Kate Murdoch's Stone Circle follows the story of Antonius, a poor lad in Pesaro who works as a servant in the local palazzo's kitchen to help support his widowed mother and his siblings. Antonius gets the chance to audition to be the new apprentice to the town's aging seer Savinus, and his mind-reading abilities set him well above the other talent on offer.
Complicated by Savinus' social obligation to add the Conte's slightly-talented son as second apprentice, the story gathers emotional depth as the antipathy between the two young men grows to dangerous proportions. At stake is not only the future post as a fully-fledged seer, but also the love of the seer's clever and talented daughter Giulia.
I'm resisting spoilers here, as usual, but I think readers will enjoy this fully-imagined historical fantasy. There is sumptuous detail and breathless action, mind-reading and shape-shifting, bullying by church and the rich, and a wonderful rounded finale. If you enjoy the likes Juliet Marillier, Mary Stewart, and Katherine Kerr, transport yourself immediately to Pesaro!
Kate Murdoch's Stone Circle follows the story of Antonius, a poor lad in Pesaro who works as a servant in the local palazzo's kitchen to help support his widowed mother and his siblings. Antonius gets the chance to audition to be the new apprentice to the town's aging seer Savinus, and his mind-reading abilities set him well above the other talent on offer.
Complicated by Savinus' social obligation to add the Conte's slightly-talented son as second apprentice, the story gathers emotional depth as the antipathy between the two young men grows to dangerous proportions. At stake is not only the future post as a fully-fledged seer, but also the love of the seer's clever and talented daughter Giulia.
I'm resisting spoilers here, as usual, but I think readers will enjoy this fully-imagined historical fantasy. There is sumptuous detail and breathless action, mind-reading and shape-shifting, bullying by church and the rich, and a wonderful rounded finale. If you enjoy the likes Juliet Marillier, Mary Stewart, and Katherine Kerr, transport yourself immediately to Pesaro!
August 28, 2021
With it's setting in 16th century Italy, the plot of Stone Circle is a simple one: tensions rise as two young men from opposite ends of the social status ladder strive for love and success. Though I wouldn't say there were any big surprises, I was quickly sucked into the story and was eager to continue turning pages.
The story is written in third person omniscient narrative, so the reader is treated to insights from many of the book's characters. I got a little confused with the he's/she's a few times, but could usually figure out who belongs to the he/she after a second pass.
Antonius, the story's protagonist, is a very likable character, and it is easy to root for him. Since seeing/mind reading is the guiding force behind the plot, I hoped to spend more time in Antonius's thoughts (just because it would be interesting), but as-is there is already plenty to go on.
I would recommend this book to fans of fantasy, romance, and Italian history.
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
The story is written in third person omniscient narrative, so the reader is treated to insights from many of the book's characters. I got a little confused with the he's/she's a few times, but could usually figure out who belongs to the he/she after a second pass.
Antonius, the story's protagonist, is a very likable character, and it is easy to root for him. Since seeing/mind reading is the guiding force behind the plot, I hoped to spend more time in Antonius's thoughts (just because it would be interesting), but as-is there is already plenty to go on.
I would recommend this book to fans of fantasy, romance, and Italian history.
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
July 1, 2021
Once upon a time...
Awesomely pictorially described, Stone Circle is a paranormal historical love story as well as a romance. Above all, it is the story of family love, empathy, and loyalty, true and genuine love rather than narcissistic self involvement, and the real measure of personal worth. A master seer with a beautiful psychically gifted daughter takes on two apprentices: one is lowborn and incredibly talented, while the other, minimally gifted one is the son of the seer's wealthy patron. Feelings of entitlement and damaged pride lead to harassment, vengeful pranks, wrongful accusations, and attempted murder. Exquisite imagery and a tone of patient understanding save what might have been a maudlin farce, and make it instead touching, clever, bittersweet - a tale of far-reaching poetic justice in a time of magic and courtly romance. This is a voluntary ARC review
Awesomely pictorially described, Stone Circle is a paranormal historical love story as well as a romance. Above all, it is the story of family love, empathy, and loyalty, true and genuine love rather than narcissistic self involvement, and the real measure of personal worth. A master seer with a beautiful psychically gifted daughter takes on two apprentices: one is lowborn and incredibly talented, while the other, minimally gifted one is the son of the seer's wealthy patron. Feelings of entitlement and damaged pride lead to harassment, vengeful pranks, wrongful accusations, and attempted murder. Exquisite imagery and a tone of patient understanding save what might have been a maudlin farce, and make it instead touching, clever, bittersweet - a tale of far-reaching poetic justice in a time of magic and courtly romance. This is a voluntary ARC review
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